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‘The church is located 7930 Eastern Avenue, NE Washington, DC 20012. The church formerly belonged to Beth Shalom Hebrew Congregation. Since the church built for the Jewish religion everything in and out is completed for the Hebrew. The church purchased by Ethiopian Evangelical Church in October 15, 1995. The front of the church has Ten Commandments written in Hebrew language. The back of the church shows that the church was built in 1957. The outside of the church is made up of red bricks. The church is in a remote location. It is very big church compare to the other churches. It holds about one thousand one hundred people. Especially Sunday it’s very busy and on the New Year day there’s no space to sit even on the floor.
The entrance of the church has a small stairway which runs along a path. The path by the stairway is made up of a beautiful ceramic tile on the right side. The whole path has a counter with people selling DVD’s, books and CD’s. On the left side of the path is the main entrance of the church.
The Sanctuary of the church has folding chairs that can be fold up and down and it’s made up of carpet and the front of the sit there is container that can hold books or different material. The back sit is high so the front of the pulpit can be seeing easily and it is going down like a mountain. The pulpit is made for the Hebrews and it has white natural stone designed so stunning and has light to go with it. The front of the pulpit have two stairs one can go up and one can go down the front of the pulpit is very decorative by flower and the wall have a wooden cross on it.
The ceiling have very large dented circle with six stars on it. The large circle has very bright light and big microphone on it. The floors are made up of small ceramic tile and the red carpet leads the way to the pulpit. The walls are made for Hebrew that have the David stars connected each others that are paint with golden color. The rest of the wall is painted with light green color and also have about ten wooden container connected with the wall that can hold the flowers. Beside the pulpit after the front seat has an emergency exit that has two doors that takes directly leads to outside of the back doors. The walls have in total ten windows each side is five that have white curtains in side and red valances out side.
The church has one stairs up that takes to the bath rooms for men and women and daycare for kids’ age six month to four years and also have several office. The middle stairs that can takes to the main pastor office and the youth pastor office and also have different offices, and one office that can put DVD and CD and several recorder.

The back doors also has a entrance that takes to big whole way usually Sunday until the youth program started the youth hangout in the whole way. The whole way on the right side has two pastors office and the maintain office. On the left side of the whole way that takes to the small chapel that can hold two hundred people. The chapel has individual sit on it and the window is much designed widows no curtains are necessary. After the chapel there is room that can hold at least five hundred people that is designed for the weeding very decorated for Hebrew. The roof is very decorated by design chandelier light bulb. The room have two kitchen one very big it have waking refrigerator and very big oven and stove. The small kitchen has small stove and food preparing area. The church has three stares every satire has bath room for man and woman. ‘

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